|Reviews for Distant Fellowship|
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This is good, sweet that it was based off a request.
And the shape of the poem is good, the rhyme scheme is unpredictable (which is good)
You give the reader a clear image of what you've written, like the setting and the feeling.
And you've obviously gone over it many times to rid any mistakes you've seen, great poem.
| MusicalTearz chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
Aww, this is awesome. I can relate a lot with this piece too, which makes all the better.
I particularly like the lines: "When your wings tear and you falter I am here
I will stitch your heart back together and dry every tear"
You use such beautiful imagery and yet again I am truly amazed. This is going to sound corny, but...keep it up! Please!
Nuff Love, Matteo
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
aw this ones so sweet and nice :D beautiful!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Great, very beautiful, love the first and last stanzas especially x weasel within x
| Glassed Rose chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
first of all, I would like to thank you for all of the reviews that you have added to my poems. Thank you!
Second, this is a really good poem. I really enjoyed reading this... and I loved how you did the rhyming!
| Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
I love the sweet simplicity of this poem, the gentle promises of constancy that are so hard to find in this world. Both of you are blessed to have this.
| Grace Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Nice Poem... It would be nice if I had a friend like that.. No, my friends are great but to have one that would always be there in your time of need... It's selfish but everyone wants a good friend deep down...
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
I don't think you have any idea how much this poem means to me. Aisha already told you how much I loved it, she even told you exactly how I reacted right after I read it _
It's really beautiful, and I really admire you for writing such a wonderful poem about my friendship with Aisha. You're a great writer!
Thank you so much!
| Ms.O'Byrne chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
I love it!_ A LONG Smile for you!. I thank you alot for your review i'm new and yadda yadda and lucky to get encouragement from other writers but Now I might not have to rely on Music to encourage me and I can start on People in my life and yadda yadda and all the good stuff in the world!
| LiebchenRose chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Nice to see you writing again. Nice poemHawke
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Aww. I know I already told you how much this means to me and that I absolutely love it. But some people just need reminding! _
My friend loved it so much. She said (I quote) "Aww man that poem is so awesome! I love it! Thanks man, it means a lot to me!" (I quote)
It's so beautiful and full of emotion. I didn't give you much information on my friendship and you made it exactly how it is.
How talented you are my friend! _
I couldn't say enough how much it meant to me for you to take up your time to make me a poem! You rock so hard Matt!
Ok. I think I've pretty well said enough. I don't want this review to seem like I'm obsessed! _
Thanks again Matthew. It means so much.