Type your review here . it's an amazing story, but since 'the devil' had once been an angel-a born angel at that. Isn't he able to take over being the ruler of heaven. Surely that's a loophole...

... well that change did absolutely nothing since he WAS born an angel citizen. Hurray, loop holes!

Ok I loved this story. The oyster problem I had was with the way it ended. I felt that you should've let them talk out why he left and what he did and said to the council. Besides that it was a great story!

Since this was written in 2005, I can forgive all the plot holes, grammar errors, and rush delivery of the story. I loved it anyways.

This was a really great story supernatural stuff is not really to my liking but after reading this it could be ...good job

Omg...where do I even begin? Well first off your an amazing author with incredible talent. Each chapter was perfect and always left me hungry for more. The charecters were well developed and the plot exceeds excellency. Indeed, you have done an amazing job. Can't wait to read more from you:)

Nice story,I had a wonderful time reading this story and I which u could make it a little longer, but I still love it.

Oh no Muto... tsk2 tsk2..

Hehe, stayed up way too late reading until the end, but I very much enjoyed your story.

Almost a century later - 8 years - and your story is still popular, amazing and a good read.

That was a well-thought-out story with a nice plot twist. But I must say, that I kind of figured out beforehand that Salax must be Dominius. I don't know how I did that but yeah, it was nevertheless interestingly done. (Maybe it was because you emphasized on him a lot in the flashback passages but that's not a bad thing. Foreshadowing etc. is always good.)

I love the "slow" romance (in that they didn't just jump each other right then and there) (even though it was only like 13 days (but love comes either way, right? One time it's slowly creeping into one's heart, the other time it'll just come crashing down like thunder)). I loooooove how Salax is just that seductive.

What I'd also like to mention is:
In the first "chapter" (prologue) we're introduced to Salax and are already confronted with his... free ways of his libido (ha ha). And we're not repulsed by it _because_ we still don't know him well. I even thought it great, that Salax was everyone's wet fantasy.

But hours and chapters later we see the scene with Slavtor and oh my gosh.
You make me love the characters so much that even I was appalled that Salax kissed him.

And that's a job well done.

This chapter made me laugh soo hard

Aw. :3 Salax actually admitted it.

D: Well.

OH snap. I knew it.

Oh Salax. I think he has a crush. XD He just blurts out something. It's so funny.