I love it. It's absolutely amazing. The two lines "love filled sin / brings heaven to us" are the ones that really hit me. Again, I don't know why.. they just did..

It's sad but true. I think that there can only be one totally true church. This is very powerful, and I totally agree! Nicely done.

If it's no trouble, I was hoping you'd R&R my new poem Timeless Rain. Thanks!

In the last line, "religions" should be "religion's." Being preached at is disgusting, I agree. Actually, I'm agnostic but when I visit my friend's church I sometimes get all teary. They have this really well-spoken priest...