Reviews for The Broken Road
Fayre Meira chapter 23 . 12/30/2008
could definitely be mold into a good novel :)
thecakethief chapter 12 . 12/28/2008
I love this story! Absolutely delightful and witty but still tinged with drama.
Sabreal chapter 24 . 12/20/2008
This story was pretty amazing.

Great to hear one of your stories is published. Sounds like music to my ears.

I just love the characterization of everyone and I love the whole Logan and Lily saga (er, hello? Their names alliterate! What more proof is needed to prove they are destined to love each other forever?). It was really sweet. Lily's uncle- Lord Whatshisname is a great big old meanie- I mean murdering his wife/future child/brother/sister in law/ attempted murder of his neice...

Boy was he a busy villain. I'm glad he died. I don't even feel mildly guilty uttering those words cos this story IS fictional. And he deserved it. *chuckles evilly*

It's so awesome when Logan sends Rebecca away and feels jealous over his wife's possible "betrayal." It's even more awesome when he realises he's a fool and rushes to Lily, and doesn't even doubt her child is his.


And Finally- I like it how you don't get her magically to "see" again at the end- that makes me go mushy, that does.

Gee- you've made me go all gushy. Bleurgh. I hate it when that happens.


Devilish Kisses chapter 4 . 12/17/2008
Uh-oh, looks like someone's jeal-ous! :D loved this chapter and can't wait to read on!
thenighting-gale chapter 24 . 12/4/2008
Well I am extremely happy for your book deals, you deserve them! I think this is the perfect story for young adults. It is sweet, with just the right amount of sweet romance. I know you have rated it M, but I think it is completely appropriate for teenage girls. I liked reading about how excited you were to receive your reviews. There are typos in this story, but nothing that greatly interrupted the flow. Your characters are well developed and realistic. I don't really have any suggestions, your writing seems intentionally simple, like you meant to write to an audience of your average 14-17 year olds. I don't really have anything else to say, except congratulations! chapter 24 . 11/29/2008
I loved the story! You are an excellent writer. Congratulations on Prada and Prejudice, as well! I can't wait for it to hit bookstores in June! I'll make sure I get a copy. :) I think you're a fantastic writer, and I wish you all the best luck with your future publications and stories!

MHolloway chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Congratulations on being published! That is SO exciting. I read this story quite some time ago, and just came upon it and was wondering if you would let me put it on my site that has links to completed stories on FP. If you don't want me to have it on there, it's not a problem. You can check it out at: /givelove-thentakeitaway/

Again, congratulations and I really loved The Broken Road and I'll totally check out the book you have coming out.
wistfulpearl chapter 23 . 9/18/2008
this was an amazing read! i really enjoyed it. good luck with your publishing!
CrossoverNut chapter 24 . 9/12/2008
Dear Mandy,

I am truly inspired to read that you are getting a book deal. I am also an interested writer and I was very excited to hear about the book. I can not wait to read it. Keep up the good work.
RawrDinosaurGrrr chapter 24 . 9/4/2008
This was amazing! By far, one of my absolute favorite stories I've read so far on this site. On any site in fact. I laughed, I cried, you really pulled me into the story. In fact, I've now stayed up about two hours later than I should have because I couldn't stop reading. I was too entranced. Bravo. I will be waiting for your book to come out into stores next year and definitely will be buying a copy so I can have some of your awesome writing firsthand. ]
Obsession Changes Things chapter 23 . 9/1/2008
Okay. First off congradulations, I'm totally going to buy your book when it comes out. Secondly wonderful story. I liked that you decided to keep Lilly blind it was definately refreshing to read a different story but wonderful none the less. Just a quick question: how old are you? Because your writting seems really advanced to be a teenager like myself...

LettyV chapter 23 . 8/26/2008

I loved your story! I laugh, cried... everything... really really good! The characters are amazing.

Congrats on the Book deal you got! You surely deserve it!


T.Newph chapter 24 . 8/20/2008
Oh wow...congrats on the book deal...i will definitely buy it.
T.Newph chapter 19 . 8/20/2008
For some reason though, she began to think that it would be better not to tell him. What if he didn’t believer her?

chapter 18 believer
N.M.E chapter 24 . 8/11/2008
OMG! I loved this story so much! I couldn't stop reading it. It was awesome!
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