|Reviews for Sorry|
| poops mcgee chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
This was very heartfelt and lovely. I like the flow of your rhymes and the poem itself. Great job! :D
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
aw...this is so lovely!
| Squinterian chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I like the way you've worked the rhyming in this poem; it's almost unnoticeable until one starts to think about it, flowing easily in with the atmosphere and the rhythm of the words. It makes me think of song lyrics.
Just one thought, though: "And the only things left - Is silence, doubt, and fear..." Perhaps 'are' would fit better at the start of the line than 'is'.
Simple, clean-cut, and all-around a good piece.
| Dempster chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
beautifully written. Makes me feel so sad! haha. keep up the good writing. if you have sum time on ur hands, plz come check out my work and leave a review or two, thx!