| Reviews for A Viper's Poison |
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   ice flyer chapter 8 . 3/31/2005 What an awesome story! I love the characters, the descriptions, the plot, and everything. Just one thing struck me as being a little odd - why would Sarah and Darren fall in love so quickly? They'd only met like twice really...but it does move the story along. Anyway, great job..I'll definitely come back for more! |
| hopeless romantic2aT chapter 1 . 3/31/2005 I do like this so far. Very intriguing. I'll review on the rest when i get a chance to read it all. Good job, its hard for me to find stories that i can get into because normally i get bored after the first few sentences. then again mine are probably the same way. but youve mastered the art of capturing the readers attention within the first paragraph. congrats. -hopeless |
| Raven of Ice chapter 8 . 3/30/2005 Very good. Just letting you know Im still reading. One thing though, why-in the last chapter- does Darren smell like roses? Just a little odd. |
| lostinmydreams chapter 8 . 3/30/2005 I knew Rachael was going to be the silent one! This is just getting better and better!I love the story and the pace your writing it in is great! Keep it up! |
| RoseTintedSoul chapter 8 . 3/29/2005 Hey...that was cool! I was right...oh yea...hm...nothing much to say about this chapter. UPDATE! |
| DeadlySilent chapter 8 . 3/29/2005 Dun dun dun! I just want Sarah to start protecting Darren already! lol |
| Adored Princess chapter 7 . 3/28/2005 Ah! She knows who killed her parents...*gasps* O I can't wait till the next chapter where we get to see who the silent one is...*waits patiently* Whahaha Darren and Sarah are so cute togther! I love how you added the confusion though...hehehehe it's was fun! Can't wait till the next plot twist! ~AdoredPrincess |
| DeadlySilent chapter 7 . 3/28/2005 AH Who is the silent one! TELL ME! hurry post fast! |
| lostinmydreams chapter 7 . 3/28/2005 WOW! I LOVE it its getting to be so great and very fast paced! I love your description and how well you developed your characters. I can't wait till the next chapter! |
| RoseTintedSoul chapter 7 . 3/28/2005 Omg!That was totally awesome!I have to know...who is it? Whos the silent one?Wait, a second...is it who I think it is?:S Is it Rachel?Omg! I can't wait to find out! PLease update soon!Thank would be so friggen cool if it was Rachel and Darren had no idea...oh yea! Heh...I'm getting way ahead of myself here...no for my main purpose for this review...UPDATE!~Ashley |
| Sheen chapter 1 . 3/28/2005 This story is fantastic! I can't believe it's not getting the reviews that it should be getting. You are a brilliant writter and I couldn't stop reading once I got started. |
| ReinaLucille chapter 7 . 3/27/2005 oh que bien.. she's so tough! and they're already falling in love.. so cute! update asap! |
| Caelest chapter 7 . 3/27/2005 Argh! Another cliffhanger!Glad Sarah didn't kill Darren, I liked him! Write more please! |
| OrangeSkittle31 chapter 6 . 3/23/2005 Hey! Ack! I liked the chapter...it was really cool with the codenames and all...I wonder who the coral snake is...I'm starting to get confused as to whether I like Sean or Darren better. Is Sean in love with her or "coral snake"?...and...and...thats basically it!So...write more!Ashlee |
| ReinaLucille chapter 6 . 3/21/2005 another good chapter... and i'll be holding to your word.. i'm expecting alot of plot twists out of this! theres going to be some huge drama with the sean/sara/darren triangle.. wahoo! update soon! |