Reviews for Unrequited
t3h Butterzfly of Nothing chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Gorgeous. Very nice. Not the shivery-inducing poem that I was expecting from the... er, structure, of your review, but a nice sort of torn peace, stuck between the lines when one reads it out loud.

I like it. _
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
'tis beautiful
Momentary Sins chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
i love the word 'unrequited' it reminds me of slipknot.

but anyways, the poem... you're structure and rhyming, it's all good, and i can feel the pain of the poem, and i envision someone lying in a kitchen floor with sunlight streaming in over them...