Reviews for The Gem
Yioujuin chapter 2 . 3/5/2005
Interesting start! I like how you've explained Eva and the card signals very easily-didn't drag at all. I think going more in depth with atmosphere and setting, especially in the senses (i.e., textures of cloth, light/dark, hot/cold, etc.) will help the reader really get more connected with the world you're establishing.
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