Reviews for This Fountain Breathes No Life
Stassney chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
im sure this would be beautiful ... if only i knew french
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Effective.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
My French is long in the past of shadows of highschool but still I love the opening lines, silken water, is just an interesting metaphor.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
i like this, awesome writing!
Munchin chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Good try. It is interesting but your french is incorrect.. I could tell you what i thought you meant to say but then it would be my interpretation so I wont.. interesting restrictions! Smile. Good idea