Reviews for haikus of my life
Squirrel Lejant chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
wow, that is the story of my life right there. very nice!-ev
Princess-anna57 chapter 5 . 2/23/2005
Wow! This is a great collection of haikus that I can completely relate to! Great poetry; keep writing!Thank you for reviewing me!Love Anna -xoxo-
Manuel Fajar chapter 5 . 2/21/2005
Friends,—not lovers,—once,

¿Was it a fairy tale,—old?

¿Where's true heart,—so bold?



We met,—We talked,—Wind,

Breath that gathered and was gone,—

Blown upon moon's face.



Dew evaporates,—

Green leaves long for moisture's taste,—

Clouds withhold cool rain.



All her gold splendor,—

Shining rays thrown down on night,—

Moon traversing sky.



"¡To swine don't throw pearls!"—

¿Isn't that what Jesus said?

¿Or, do I misquote?



Longing,—dry sand waits,

Restitution by typhoon,—

Storms & lightning fresh.
PyroChica chapter 5 . 2/21/2005
so sad...

These haikus were very good. I enjoyed them a lot great job!

~PyroChica~*