Reviews for haikus of my life |
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Squirrel Lejant chapter 1 . 3/16/2005 wow, that is the story of my life right there. very nice!-ev |
Princess-anna57 chapter 5 . 2/23/2005 Wow! This is a great collection of haikus that I can completely relate to! Great poetry; keep writing!Thank you for reviewing me!Love Anna -xoxo- |
Manuel Fajar chapter 5 . 2/21/2005 Friends,—not lovers,—once, ¿Was it a fairy tale,—old? ¿Where's true heart,—so bold? — We met,—We talked,—Wind, Breath that gathered and was gone,— Blown upon moon's face. — Dew evaporates,— Green leaves long for moisture's taste,— Clouds withhold cool rain. – All her gold splendor,— Shining rays thrown down on night,— Moon traversing sky. — "¡To swine don't throw pearls!"— ¿Isn't that what Jesus said? ¿Or, do I misquote? — Longing,—dry sand waits, Restitution by typhoon,— Storms & lightning fresh. |
PyroChica chapter 5 . 2/21/2005 so sad... These haikus were very good. I enjoyed them a lot great job! ~PyroChica~* |