well done. powerful, beautiful

Interesting. Very emotional and well put. 4th line is my favorite. Great job.

damn do i get that! great writing... that's really all i can say.

Very powerful

Beautiful in a strange way...

Hey! Tis me again, back from the land of too-lazy-to-review!

This an amazing poem hun, really brilliant! I love the way you used italics, really brings out the reality of the poem, rather than it being just fiddly words...if that makes sense...? I don't know, it did in my head! But then a lot of things make sense in my head that don't when put anywhere else!

Anyhow, amazing poem!

Love Rozie x x x

nice, deep and very strong poem. i like how you used the italics in to to empathesize your point. great poem

Good poem, and I like the imagery.