Reviews for The Devil, My Sire
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
I like the feel of this, the flow of it is very strong and the way that it 'beats' is something that I find interesting.

Keep it up.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Wow, really, really nice. I like it.
Tears of IceFire chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
man, I love your vocabulary. It gives it suck variety. KEEP WRITING! And thatz a demand )
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
very good! i like your last line...s. nice work; i look forward to reading more of your writing.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Whoa alex, very powerful indeed. Nice-Keith Andrew
Kressida chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
wow.. this is great, i really like it!

love you, ~zai~
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 2/22/2005

Well. I believe in the devil and stuff, so I think you did a great job on this.

It's so true too.

Good job. Good poem.

Much Love-Suicdial_Greeting
Jessa Kulp chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
This is great i love the imagery and the truth of it. lots of love in return ~Jessa
addie pray chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Wow. Horribly vibrant imagery. (Bubbling skin) Nice flow to it, and thanks for the reviews.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
this is really good _
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
realy good, with lots of petic influence in there! love it!
Ahemait chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
oh that was positively awesome. the rhyming was great, something i can hardly ever do, and the idea and the structure of this poem was great. good describtion and imagry, wha hoo it's on my favourites!