Reviews for Held In The Past
silverquill212 chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
I'm not sure I understand much of this, but I have to say the various visual images are startling. Especially "the whisperings of others," "knocking at my door," "hide behind this disguise," "through the door," and so on. The most powerful one, though, was the whole skeletons in the closet bit-it was like remembering an old horror movie.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Very good alex, i love you -Keith Andrew
Ahemait chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
wow, that very detailed and very, very good. i liked it a lot. the idea and imagery were also freakishly good. another great poem!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
I can really relate to this, I've been there many times. Its a great poem, even if some people might not like the swearing.

Keep it up.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
i love thi poem it is really good _
xHannahx chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
i especially like the fourth and fifth lines from the end. nice job.