Reviews for The Lost Variable
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Hm interesting poem. I think alot of people can relate to this poem...the age old matchmaking where someone is missing. I like how you used chemistry terms as a metaphore (variable, highly noticible...) very nice. Good write.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
man, i agree... and i would say i love it soo soo much (your poem) BUT i am busy hating math rite now, and 'lost variable' is so reminiscent of, well math... so it is just very very good...:P
feelingshortofstable chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
That's a great title - I love it. Brings about an imagery to me that is very realistic, and reasonable (I suppose because it reminds me of math). Anyway, good job.