Reviews for The Governess and the Gentleman
Random chapter 6 . 11/12/2014
This story is to much like Jane Eyre. I still like it though.
christinaxxyo chapter 24 . 12/23/2010
Honestly, I thought the story moved a little too fast but I still really like the plot and the characters. You did a good job on finishing this :)
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I can't wait to see what comes next in the story :)
bubublacz chapter 3 . 4/28/2010
I'm chuckling right now...
bubublacz chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
This sounds interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Lovely to see, that she's not dainty, too!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 24 . 2/21/2009
Haha fantastic story!

xx
Written chapter 24 . 3/24/2008
what a sweet story!

I feel like you may have rushed it in parts with more telling than showing, and there was the purple prose at the very start that was somewhat noticeable (which, I suppose, was too MUCH showing?).

Nevertheless, you pulled through and for the majority of the time your prose was natural and clear, and I had a good image in my head of what was going on. This is one of the better stories I've read on this site, to be honest. I think it was a good gesture how you didn't have her accept the proposal right away; it shows good sense.

I think you've done a lovely job! good work :)
Written chapter 16 . 3/23/2008
haha, one track mind with the candy, those girls have.
Written chapter 15 . 3/23/2008
oh my! I think that was mostly Dan's fault for not giving a heads up...
Written chapter 14 . 3/23/2008
it's going wonderfully so far! can't wait to read more :) hope it all ends well.
Written chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
what a lovely story! you had a bit too much purple prose at the start, but you got me by the end. I can't wait to read more.
Winterbirdie chapter 24 . 1/8/2008
very good story! D i love reading stories that are well developed and just great!

Thanks so much!
cinnamon-24 chapter 24 . 10/31/2007
Aww! That was way aweseome! Great job!
cinnamon-24 chapter 16 . 10/31/2007
I "might" if ...introduces herself!

hehehe!

I like Andrew... do set him up with someone nice won't you
cinnamon-24 chapter 14 . 10/31/2007
Mariah...

Your pots boiling over.
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