Reviews for Why Do I
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
nice poem, although for some reason it doesn't feel complete to me, almost as if it still needs an ending. great message, though.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
I hate that feeling, I really do...heh heh, kinda made some of my best friends mad at me...so yeah, all too familiar.

Great job!

Elli
Et Tu Brute chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
The theme in this one has changed, this is good, same rhyme scheme though *shrug* ill get over it
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
I like your questioning. Taking time to stop and take a look at your self...Love nature vs. new nature in Christ...
uniquexsoul chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
i liked it. well written. im sure alot of ppl can relate to it
RiverDoe chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
nice work, i liked it.
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
not bad, short and succint...upbeat image for some reason...brings to mind of a song...keep up the good workT