|Reviews for The Cheese Poem|
| Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Wow! never knew a piece of cheese could be so... dark (and I don't mean the color). I loved the imagery and metaphor. They convey something much deeper than cheese.
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
great peice, i like that it's about the mouse after the cheese,it's kinda nifty... thanks for sharing "the early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese"