Reviews for Boys Don't Like Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far...it seems that you haven't updated for awhile but I hope you will update soon. .- |
![]() ![]() Really like how this story goes. Well, there are numbers of gramatical errors but since I, myself are not an expert, I let it pass my reading. But, to become a good writer, gramatical errors are a big NO NO. If it takes a lot of your time to correct these errors, look for a beta reader..your friends or maybe from one of your friends? Reviewers in ficpress are hard to please. To get good reviews, write a good story. Wipe all those 'blemishes'. Grammar errors are your fiend/foe. lol. I learned this the hard way. I have so many critiques but from them, they build my vocabulary and my self esteem. Don't take critiques the bad way, make it..constructive. Improve your story. It's really good and more enjoyable if it's written without the grammar errors and spellings...Really forward to read more... xPeacex |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi again, and no I didn't delete your review. I like reviews way too much to delete them, even if they're a ramble that puts me in a negative light. I posted my comment, I have hence learned that on the proverbial path of life, it's easier to just let things go, as well as keep things positive. It's much better to keep your outlook on people generally positive, for example. Because of this, I wish to apologize for the negativity in my previous comment. I really had nothing nice to say, and therefore shouldn't have commented in the first place. It was very bold of you to reply to my comment by giving me a nice one. I wish you an equally good day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() let me begin by saying that you are a natural. it's great work only chapters 3 and 4 were very short. hope that you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so pretentious! The girl (i.e. you) acts like she's the smartest person on earth, and yet the story is full of grammatical errors! You're also making it come across as though this story is really original and intriguing, while it's not. I'm not trying to say that I'm so much better, but at least my stories don't try to sound like they're the shiz-nits that walk the earth. And don't bother me about flaming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! I wanna hear more... Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep updating, this is a great story! are u srs itz true? yikes. sure i think the same, buh i hav no gutz. well, i do...i just feel really guilty afterwards...i suk ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! I hope u continue writting it! |
![]() ![]() Ok, your grammar is rather appalling, and your writing has worsened. The character sounds like she's fifteen. Make sure that you have commas after and before quotes, when referring to a person. It's, "Would you like to be an astronaut, Kelly?” Notice the comma before Kelly. It's not 'Human's lie.' It's just 'humans' as it's plural. Minor stuff like that is kind of cringe-inducing. |
![]() ![]() Potential there. The spelling slightly turns me away. 'Plutonic' is platonic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story doesn't seem to have a setting, plot, such and such yet. Its not really coming together for me.. but nevertheless i still like the style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter screams girl power! haha i like your reasoning... I feel excactly the same way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so relatable... so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. Hey, the main character and I have the same name, except mine is spelled Jayne, not Jane. Anyway, keep up the good work and make the chapters longer. :] (More description wouldn't hurt either.) I love the way you write. -jayne |