|Reviews for Forgotten Autumn Nights|
| SlugHunter chapter 4 . 6/7/2010
i really really like the story line so far, i have a few issues
1. you may be a fan of biology.. but please please dont name a charachter "allele" there are plenty of names that sound similar enough T_T
2. Although ur representation of her hardships is understandable, i think maybe you should ease the reader into it. Mainly in the second chapter with the interaction with the father, it seems kinda out of no-where which makes the father seem less realistic and lacks depth
anyways you haven't updated recently... but i thought i'd review anyway. But yeah you definately have great ideas and you actual writing is soo easy to read and engaging so keep writing! _
| ghurl00 chapter 4 . 11/4/2009
i like the story line!:D
| buddyxoxo chapter 4 . 8/17/2009
Hey just wanted to let you know, I totally like where this story is can i say!I'm a total sucker for depressed, antisocial,neglected just wanted you to know that I;m waiting for your updates.I hope they come and all the best!
| chocolatechipash chapter 4 . 1/31/2009
hmm sounds pretty interesting, has potential.. i dont like any of your characters though except for noah.. which might be a problem later on but update soon, im still really excited to see where this wil go.
| SapphireEyes16 chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
please update soon!
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
OMG this is SOO good. i actually COULD NOT BELIEVE u have not updated since 2005? I feel lyk im gonna cry, such a good story gone to waste... ahh well. guess i'll have to keep looking *sighs*
| SapphireEyes16 chapter 4 . 11/4/2007
i luv ur story so far! keep updating
| springdaisy chapter 4 . 11/2/2007
i wish you would continue with this story! it has such a great story line!
| booheas chapter 4 . 7/22/2007
aww i wish you will continue with this story!
| brittle hearts chapter 4 . 6/2/2007
Nice few beginning chapters, I hope to see more from you soon!
| tornangelwings chapter 4 . 2/8/2007
this is really good please keep going damn i need slepep *yawns and rubs eyes*
| wandless chapter 4 . 12/30/2006
Great story so far! I've enjoyed reading it so far and I'm looking forward to your next update. I got a little teary in one part..!
| anonymous chapter 4 . 12/18/2006
Hey. This is a really great story. I love how you show their emotions and how sometimes you can just relate. I'm just guessing but did you get your lyrics from the song Cry by Mandy Moore? Just asking because my friend sang it once, and I instantly remembered it when I saw the chapter titles.
| randomperson chapter 4 . 10/26/2006
Pity you didn't update it, it was promising to be a good read.
| FadedWhispers chapter 4 . 8/16/2006
gosg i just want to KILL caroline! *seethes* lol...
hehe plz update soon, storys so good...