|Reviews for Aimless|
| CeruleanHeart chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
This is positively amazing! I don't think I quite understand it all, but I think this is just one of those poems you have to really read slowly and again and again to fully understand it. I love these kind of poems; they make me think! In line four, shouldn't "to" be "too"? Just a little spelling error; no big deal though. I love the use of "oft"; it is very unique and I had to look it up at first becuase I had never seen that word before! You make very good use of your words in your works! Keep it up!