Reviews for The One
RuleroftheSmokyTavern chapter 1 . 5/5/2006

You should be a songwriter... I'm going to add this to my favorites!

Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Yep this was really good, it seems as though this poem expressed the emotion to that of anyone's perfectly, Keep it Up!
CreZian chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
wow gosh this one good but just check your spelling thats my prob too!well al in al this is a good poem!
Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
You got it bad...

Well this summer i had a crush too, i got over it. but glad you found someone. good luck! you write such wonderful poems about HIM.

Well..WRITE ON!(
ChickyInTheClouds chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
love i like your longer peoms more their cool
franko chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
aw, it's so sweet. I loved the rhyming pattern. Keep it up. and ur pomes are definatlly better than mine.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I liked the rhythmn, it was really playful. Sounds like someone's in
Tutube chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
. whee! omg! i love this poem! it's so sweet, AND it has such a good rhyme scheme and a very strong rythm to it! Great job! very well written! keep it up!
x chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
Man you must truly love this guy..Go for him already what are you waiting for,(lol)your such a are you filled with feelings..I loved it

A'd give it an AWSOME!