Reviews for Unable
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
"Unable" reminds me of someone at an 'in the dark' part of their life searching for a way to reach the light again, hoping for a better day. i especially like the second stanza.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Really good poem, I'm sorry if it's an actual event that caused this more recent writing. Love the poem!

Elli
Et Tu Brute chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
I see a pattern in your rhyme scheme/subjects *curious* are all your poems like this or just your most recent two...*goes off to check*
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
You conveyed the pain so well...Made me think of several things...Draw near to God and he will draw near to you, Let go and let God, and Pr. 25:2 It is the glory of God to conceal a thing: but the honor of kings is to search out a matter. Great job.