Reviews for Going Forth
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
interesting
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
This was very moving and engrossing throughout. I think you did way better than "not too bad" here.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
Sylvia Ann Elliot chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
I like it, even though it tells a sad story. I especially love the first two verses, where the child is still innocent. The imagery in this poem is excellent. I like the line with the butterfly wings and the candy. Kudos! *bows*