|Reviews for The Fight|
| S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
...Awsome. Thanks for putting it up, I really relate. *PAMMY*
| SagaciousPnay chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Wonderfully written Trista. I'm sorry you felt these awful feelings and i KNOW u can cope...and move on :)
I can't wait to read more of ur poems. They rock!
Thanx a million for reading some of my poems. I'm grateful to hear such comments ::bows::SagaciousPnay
| Roselillie chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Nice, I like how I can hear and feel the argument. Keep it up
| Angel of the North chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Good poem, but you could use being more concise given the topic, or else splitting it down into ideas/stanzas.
Be careful about slips into cliche 'daggers are going through my heart'.
Lots of merit in it.