Reviews for The Fight
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
...Awsome. Thanks for putting it up, I really relate. *PAMMY*
SagaciousPnay chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Wonderfully written Trista. I'm sorry you felt these awful feelings and i KNOW u can cope...and move on :)

I can't wait to read more of ur poems. They rock!

Thanx a million for reading some of my poems. I'm grateful to hear such comments ::bows::~SagaciousPnay
Roselillie chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Nice, I like how I can hear and feel the argument. Keep it up
Angel of the North chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Good poem, but you could use being more concise given the topic, or else splitting it down into ideas/stanzas.

Be careful about slips into cliche 'daggers are going through my heart'.

Lots of merit in it.