Reviews for A Desperate Plea
night62611 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
quite sad, a good write
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Striking like a sharp whip across the back. The pain is everywhere in every word and emphasizes as it continues on. Then, it fades so eeriely.
Roselillie chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
That's really good...Keep it up!
peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
wow,beautiful
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
this is smthg for sure. its so real and brutally honest, good job
Sat Hari chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Wow. I like haikus, but I can't write them, so I think you've done an amazing job. In Japan they're very flexible about the syllable rule, so its sorta still a haiku...
born-again chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Powerful. The use of italics is great.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Truthful and painfully real. - Great job!

!~* Noelle *~!
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
wow, i love this! this is really cute!

thanks for reviewing by the way D
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
All that you had said,

Promises,—sweet entreaties,—

Fleeting moonglow sheen . . .



I don't hear your words,

Heartless cold gloom meanings stark,—

Parting's such a bitch . . .



If I died once love,

If I loved once dear,—never,

Would you fade from me.



¿What's this thing called death?

¿Separation more than yours?—

Rending earthquake,—heart.



¿How could I know pain,

When I hadn't love you yet?—

Now the fool must pay.



Cold rain penetrates,

Like the meaning of your words,

"I'm leaving you now."
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I've thought like this before. You have so many writings. Plus alot of them that I've read are awesome and last I really love your penname.
Written chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
nicely done! lots of feeling in so few words.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Yes I can relate. But then again, I think everyone can in his or her own way. I think you did a great job, it really spoke to me!

Thanks for your review! It means alot!

Much love,

Rosanna.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
I think this is a great poem. I absolutely love it!

Elli
indigotear-to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
I liked the title, and i never really liked short poems like this, but yours seem different. Well, good job
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