Reviews for The Demon
LordK chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
This is interesting. I like what you're saying but the flow got a little awkward to me at some points. Still, what you're saying is really cool, and the writing is clever. Thanks for the review!
Leif Erikson chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Nice wording, I could actually see a pretty clear picture in my head. I like it.
YouHaveBeenWarned chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
aweome analogy. there is so much emotion in there! keep it up!
ChintzyHoyden chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
very nice )
jaganshi-kyou chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
i really liked this poem and also why. i could practically feel the emotions.
Darkhymns chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
Nice. Provides vivid imagery here. This is a great poem.
TheAngelofhope chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
This was very good.
VindictiveGoddessOfPinkRabbits chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
That is a really good poem... a little creepy but cool. Keep writing!