Reviews for Dirty
stine chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
yeah i don't really know what to say...i can feel what you're saying so i guess your depressed-ness worked...

definitely like elizabeth said it was
dubtown wodubville chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
I LOVED it! It was one of those poems that just makes you say "damn"... because the metaphors were good, descriptions were great, and it flowed.. superb job.
hit chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
hihiits a very pretty poemits very you . I could just imagine you saying the poem and i liked tha. It made it more "real". Keep writing. :)
euphonia chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
I loved it... so much symbolism!Beautiful, my friend. :) I'm sorry that something terrible happened (hope it wasn't too bad...) but this poem just emanates the angst you must have been feeling.I love it!