|Reviews for An Obscure Division|
| CeruleanHeart chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Extremely awesome description here! I love it! It flows really well; you're really good at keeping a poem going smoothly! I could really see all that was happening. I love "smoke scattered on the wind". It gave me a very vivid image! Keep it all up!
| Heide DeVries chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
Wow. This is one of those poems you can almost see. Very descriptive, nice.