Reviews for A Children's Story
Jake chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Lissa. When I say this I am not kidding or exaggerating ONE bit. I LOVE it. That was amazing and so... I don't want to sound gay. lol. :-P But it was awesome. Congrats.
Anutty Lee chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Would love to hear you sing this...such a sad story but you can really feel what the girl feels. You have a wonderful way of putting emotions into words.
ImtheONE chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
really good.I could see that as one of her songs :) This is my fav. part:And that boy,

What she never knew,

Was that he felt the same way.

But she lived in her haunted past,

And didn’t live to see today.

Why didn’t she speak?

Why didn’t he tell?

Her heart died, and so she fell.

But that’s life, after all

We fly…

Just to fall.

But,

Remember, my children that love conquers all…

Hehe I read the whole song 3 times...i liked it that much! :)
tears-of-innocence chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
WOW, this is so great, I can just imagine Amy Lee singing it, I love this song so much, it's going on my faves list.
angelic-journals chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
Really beautiful. Amy Lee is my favorite all time singer who really gets into the depths of all those complex emotions and I could see her singing it. The break indicators, though necessary, aren't really practical but that's just my p.o.v. Great job!