wow. just wow. that was so deep. i loved it! i love your way of writing. it is highly commendable in my book. DD i hope one day i could be as good as you. my writing just suck, though i know if i try i prolly can do better. lol. but congrats on a well-constructed piece of writing. i envy you, really.

and you say i'm courageous?

goddamnit, kait.

i don't know what to say, because this has left me speechless. this is fragile and raw and beautiful all at once, and it's incredible. the pure beauty of your words and the honesty and god, this is just gorgeous. i feel like i'm going to cry, fuck, i am crying. this is just beautiful beyond words. i'm adding this to my favorites a thousand times over. this is something that i almost don't want to touch, it's so fucking beautiful. goddamnit. you have me crying.

heart-breaking in its beauty.

I love this song! As you can tell in my author profile lol I have such an obssession.~ I like the way you slipped the song lyrics between the story so that they merge. Very well done.

Cheers~

Eyesofahuntress

WOW...just wow. This is absolutely amazing...i read it like five times before even beginning to understand it. You're a brilliant writer - keep doing whatever it is you are cos it's wonderful.

OKay...time to comment...but honestly what can i say. Seriosuly this peice is so beautifully confusing, so mind boggling and truthfully i don't really understand...which is werid because i understand every single seperate word and yet when you put them into your complicated, interesting sentances i simply can't comprehend.

but something about this really catches me, it really draws me in and makes me think. I'm going to re-read it till i get it because i know that when i do i'll love it.

The language is very intense and i applaud you on being able to put feelings into such beautiful words!

Happy writing,

*_Sapphire Beauty

It's me, Dorothy. _

Well, the entirety of your work is very poetic. Your words are intense enough to make your reader grasp the feeling you had when you were writing this. It's really on the dark side, which makes it good and enjoyable. Nice choice of song, also. To sum it up, B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.

I hope I could have the time to read your other fics!

~Doray

hmmn, you know what? you've been asking em to read this for a while, but i didn't for the exact reason i regret reading it now. ITS SO HARD! I'm going to have 2 read it like 3 or four times before i can make any comments because it requires an in depth analysis and its like, 11;05, so yeh... i cant do that. read it, tho. and i reckon it is absolutely beautiful. You inspired me and i wrote one of my own which makes no sense whatsoever, i reckon its one of the best things ive ever written. When i catch you online, we're going 2 tlk about this (I DEMAND IT!) and ill have analysedit by then (since you never come online anymore *glares*) going out is far more important to you than chatting 2 me *sobs* meanie. I'm going to force you to look at my one shot, i want someone to read it seeing as i probably won't post it. Too personal *shrugs* so i'll shutup about myself now and um...say bye cause im sitting here hoping you'll come online..ok, maybe not. meanie! i'll review again when in the rite state of mind.

amazing work!

That was really good.

Wow, finally got around to review! Sorry it took me so is, in my opinion, very similar to many of your xanga entries, and like always, I cannot even begin to understand half of it. What I do get, though, is that there is just so much despair, disappointment, and maybe even fear put into this, as if by writing this you are purging yourself of all the bad stuff you’ve gone through, as if when you write this you really get it out of your system somehow…I can never get too used to the dark ways of your writing. Needless to say, I did not have fun reading what you wrote. In fact, at many, many different places, you made me wince in pain to see that that’s how you feel, made me shake my head in disbelieve to see that that is what you’re going through. But then again, impressing your readers has never been your objective, has it.I must say that I appreciate your honesty. None of us is perfect, and it’s good to see you admit that so openly, and that you don’t even try to hide your imperfections and “disturbing” side from everyone. I really respect that, and often wish I can do that too. Maybe I will, sometime, when I am finally able to see past myself and understand myself like you do yourself.I don’t know whether you did in fact guess that I was going to review, or even read this piece even though you know I won’t enjoy the contents, but here is my thoughts. I hope what I wrote makes sense to you, and that you’re not disappointed with my inability to give you anything more than this P

Intense, heavy read...but well portrayed. The language is strong and the writing is picturesque...but black. Good read though!

Hiya Kate,

I enjoyed reading this. I swear, it was as if you was in front of me talking. Sometimes, when we try to think when we're not in the best state of emotions, we think funny broken thoughts. I thought that showed very clearly in this. I really love how you expressed everything someone would feel and think so clearly.

Even though I'm not sure what's going on, I just kept on reading, loving the description and understanding... sort of like one of those dreams a person would have, the ones you'd forgot but remember generally what they were about or how they went. Full of random images and scenes pieced together to try to understand the day, or the life, we have.

LOL. It's just great, it did feel very personal.

I'm trying to finish this but the words are swirling around, distorting the whole computer in the process.

So I'm reviewing, partly because I can remember that I need to finish reading, and that you would be reminded again that you are one hell of an author...pardon my french.

Oh... and the fact that it takes hours to read one of your chapters...

-Sugar

That is exactly how I feel. Beautiful job with the lyrics, and using the theme of them in your writing. Did you do that on purpose?

-rachael

Tis very good and very long (That's a good thing.) I love the way you describe everything, it makes it seem more real.