Reviews for Will You
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
You have a gift for rhyiming :) Good job!

Elli
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
"Will You" is a good reminder we can be servants to others and lay our lives down for others. "Will You" is simply written but has such a potent message beyond the words.
InfiniteDreamer04 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
extremely powerful. and ur only 14. that is a serious shock that i find hard to believe. i believe it, but...WOW! keep writing!
unperfect blood chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Still as good of a writer as ever. It just hit me that your 14, you do a really good job writing and have alot of potential. I hope you keep writing
I Am Vaguely Amused chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Your word is trueFor I am blueThe responses in hateThat words abate

And I feel sorry for unbelievers, you seeThey don't want to be pitied-something's missing, so beCareful, they are unwittingly stepstools of Satan

Beautiful words.O Believer.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
such power in these words :D Very inspirational. Love 6:2-4