I liked this. :]

That was beautiful! I love the way you wrote that story...it was very moving...congratz :D

Oh! I love it. It's so well written and emotional and beautiful! I'm not sure which of your stories you wanted me to review, so I figured I would just read them both, and boy am I glad I read this. I don't usually like straight fics (sad, I know, and I'm assuming Jordan was a girl) but this was incredible. Absolutely beautiful. So emotional and morbid. I loved it. *Adds to favorites* Congratulations on being the first EVER straight story to be on my favs anywhere! Unless, of course, Jordan's a guy, in shich case, it's still absolutely lovely. Hee. Anyways, great fic.

well, um, i was talkin to ya on da fone wen i was readingh this so... hahahahahahahahahahaha...

i feel better now

hehehe, that was really sad

Amazing. Seriously, that was bloody brilliant, better than anything I could ever write lol. :D

Very morbid, emo, and good.

Love the Quequ'un A Aimer. Update that one soon, won't you? Mael is teh awesomeness.

Arkensi [signed in now!]

Excelent! The last few lines just chilled my flesh in a good kind of way. Keep up the good work

You posted it. As I said before, definitely morbid, but really good.

How sad. I know life can suck sometimes, trust me, I know, but I hope know one ever gets to the point when they think they must do that. God can change things. But despite the morbidness, and please don't think I'm putting you down, you're an awesome writing. You're very good at it. Very descriptive. Very, very descriptive, which is awesome. I always try to be more descriptive. And great diction.