|Reviews for white hot passion|
| Jess Angel chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
"White hot passion" sounds like a struggle. The format, very short lines, give it that effect. A brief piece, but powerful in its own right. ...You go! Haha!
| Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
this is going to sound really really odd, but...in the first eight lines, you gave me this sense of entropy, of this struggle to regain, as you say, "My lost sanity"- and that was really nice, especially since you wrapped the whole poem in that wonderful last line (well it was awesome to me), "My lost passion." And somehow, all these loose ends you introduced in the poem were tied by those last three words. Ok, I'm not making any sense... I can really relate to this. This is going on my favorites.