Reviews for Dad
EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Seems you and I are in the same boat in terms of how we feel about our dads. I agree with you on this line:"But I’m not sorry that you’re dyingBecause in fact the dreams in which you’re deadAre the best I’ve ever had"Keep up the good work.~Hawke
like a lover chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
wow. powerful. really. i wish i could write songs, lol...

btw, this is emalina. new name.
SportylilChica chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I love this. Your being totally honest. I have a father that's very distant, and I feel that I'm not worth anything and everything, but I truly loved this poem!
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
this is i'd have to say extremely harsh...but i know how it is and i can relate a get the feelings out very well and this is extremely emotional...i dont have the best relationship with my dad and thats seen in my poem Respect, i have to say i love that poem becoz it gets my feelings out as this one does for you...well done you a very brave for saying this stuff becoz most people would just hide behind the fake smile and not let anyone know that this does happen...very well done...i love it and i hope you feel better after this...again well done...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Yeah man, I love this one so much! I know I already told ya that, but whatever _

I think you used the perfect words for this poem, I can really relate to it. Cause I feel this way about my dad sometimes...Actually, I feel that way right now...

Anyway, really awesome and it's really one of my favorites!

Much love,

sarah chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
I totally relate to how u feel about your father ..dont worry your not alone in this fucked up world ..i feel the same way ..fathers are bastards least mine is .../i really can relate to everything ur saying in this song . No matter how hard i try ..ill never be god enough for him ..i gave up trying years ago lol ..your really talented ..i love this song ..i bet with the right chords this would be awesome ! great job u rock ! ..if uwanna read an actual note i wrote to my dad u can go to poets/lovemeplz88i think ull be able to relate ..the poems called " a note to dad " great job with this again ! :D