Reviews for How Not to Live a FairyTale Life |
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Casey Drake chapter 11 . 3/18/2005 I knew it! AND CASEY WINS! Good story. Yays for the well-placed humor and romance. :) CD |
Person-X chapter 11 . 3/18/2005 Still very good, still very captivating, and still can't see any mistakes right off. What can I say? You're a genius. |
Shadow Gryphon chapter 11 . 3/18/2005 That was great. The second he mentioned a female friend coming over, I knew that it had to be Sarah. "Go for the small stuff." Hrm. What an interesting way to describe marriage. Do update again soon! Gryph |
Chosen Aros chapter 3 . 3/17/2005 HA! HA! HA! HA! How so like Ashley! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can't even say that old woman's name...oh well. BWHAHAHAHAHAHA! This chapter is just funny! Ah...Nice laughter...Well gotta go..My school time of using the internet is almost up. CIAO! |
Chosen Aros chapter 2 . 3/17/2005 Chosen here! Man! I love the details. Each paragraph I read was so good! I have no words to describe your clever diction! MAN! I just love this story. It was funny when Sarah said Unit of Seduction. And plus I believe Erik is right about graduation. ...I just hope I wouldn't suffer through that. And also, How do you manage to think of all these big names? And how do you even say it? LOL! |
Chosen Aros chapter 1 . 3/17/2005 Chosen here! ...Wow...This Prologue is really good...I admired the way you thought of creative names and the plot seemed so original...and plus it's hilarous. Her brother, wanted to be the dashing knight and her older sister whose going to be the evil sorcerer. Ashley could be the peasant, evil sorcerer, or a princess. LOL! I didn't know you have to go University to do all these! Especially to become a peasant! LOL! I just laugh at the thought of it. This story will definitly be one of my favorite because I need some laughter in my poor life. I understand Ashley's pain because I'm too shadowed by my older siblings and having hard time deciding colleges. Oh well, I'm going to review each chapter and I have no flames about this hilarous chapter. Well Ciao! P.S. If you have the chance to review our story, Aros would greatly appreciated. Let's say he...need energy booster. |
yeahthisisanoldprofile chapter 10 . 3/16/2005 And the plot thicken...ens... |
Shadow Gryphon chapter 10 . 3/16/2005 *grins* You mean no one's ever tried to take over with only normal men. Wow. I guess that is original, then. And Ashley and Robert are cute. Gryph |
Person-X chapter 10 . 3/15/2005 No grammar, spelling etc. that I can see, magnificent plot, very absorbing, can't quite seem to get my head out of the story enough to examine the fine points of it, you know? Anyway, very very very good, I like it, and it's, nice. I don't know, excellant. Continue. |
DarkSorceress chapter 10 . 3/15/2005 So Ashley is good at plotting out evil...Hmm, maybe she will revolutionalise the fairytale world by taking out all magic...but that wouldnt be a fairytale then, would it? Great Chapter |
Lost Inside chapter 10 . 3/15/2005 Awesome! I love it! Great job! |
Lia Silverfrond chapter 3 . 3/15/2005 rather hooked to this story now...keep up the good work... |
Casey Drake chapter 9 . 3/15/2005 *sigh* don't tell me she falls in love with the "evil warlock" anyway... that'd be the perfect end to her problem. :) CD |
Lia Silverfrond chapter 2 . 3/13/2005 wow... very good so far... I'm enjoying it... |
Shadow Gryphon chapter 9 . 3/13/2005 Codstaril and Ashley are cute! And I loved the battle scene. You're funny! In a good way, of course. |