Now... if I and my friends had that luck with ranting... well.

Good story.

:) CD

i like this alot.

That's sweet, they should get together. Oh, but, what was the point of the old croon showing up? Or wasn't there one? I just don't see how it fits into the story is all. I'm probably just over analyzing, but...

Anyway, I really like this one!

It was really good. nice plot and pretty original. Just wondering though are her parents peseants or what are they?

an interesting start and idea. the only thing is that u might want to rearrange a couple of words in some parts (ie: was paying for it now vs. and now was paying for it) but it could just be me _. anyways, cant wait to see what happens next!

Good first chapter! I was laughing before I had even finished the first paragraph which is always a good sign. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen in this new story!Saharian

the first paragraph made me laugh, cuz it's such a coinsidence that there's a teacher i noe called except that he's a Bio teacher. Hehe~

Anyhow, thhis seems like a very interesting start~ i already see some funness ahead, please update soon!

Keep writing!