|Reviews for Unknown|
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
That was bittersweet. I loved it - that was really stood out to me. Great job.
You should really title your 'unknown' poems: this one could be called something as simple as 'my soul' or something like that... or 'still'. Just ideas.
| Viktrona chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
A littlt spelling errors...you are suppose to edit before you put it on the net(thats what my sister says) i know i should do it myself but i never have the time to fix some of my own errors. Wonderfully written. i love how you described how you were feeling insted of actually saying what was happening