Reviews for Give Me
katiebuggie chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
It's nicely written. :) I like it a lots
Seth Triskellion chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I liked this. it was really well written, and avoided being repetitive, as happens with so many poems like this
account not in use chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Wow...I love the line 'Give me ebony porcelain'. Beautifully done, and the last line makes you feel like something in your life is about to slip away.
Aleara chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
I think it's really good, creative and powerful like all your stuff. Keep writin for us! :) Allie