Awww that's a sad but beautiful mini story it would be great if you could write a little after story or a prequel to show how the person got in this situation

Nice work with this. It comes across as sad yet powerful - very poetic. Again, nice work here.

This is really powerful! Well done C: I love it

Whoa, this is really powerful.

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Very interesting story. I really enjoyed how it was written. Very nice!

Interesting beginning. Beautiful language. Just one thing... you may want to change the rating on this one, it's a bit misleading. Other than that sounds like an interesting story.