Reviews for Marks
Eirien chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
The rhymes and rhythm and the short lines accentuate powerfully the sad and touching message of this poem. Really well written.
FeelThePenPrick chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
hmm... you know, you should try saftey pins, they leave smaller marks... very deep. very good. KEEP UP ZEE GOOD WORK!
Strawberry Wish chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Very powerful. Love it. )

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shadow-spirit chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
this flows so well i realy like the way you put it together with the short lines and even rymes etc it realy drives its point home, lovely