Reviews for Should I? Don't Forget Me
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
This is awsome...love the concept...Keep it up.-pammy-
xoskittleness chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I reminds me of lost loves. The ones I've regreted liking and all they've done is forgot me. I like it.
amethystdawn chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Bittersweet. That's the only way I can describe it. The fact the speaker tries to cling on to what was left of their love strikes me as sort of sweet... in a pitiful way. Unable to let go... it's so sad...

Anyway, its eloquently written and very poetic I hope you keep writing. :)

BTW: This line sort of sticks out in an odd way. I think you should break it if you plan to edit: "Don’t pretend that you don’t fall back on these memories"
milady424 chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
I feel like you hit the target with the mood of your poem, and thank god you did not have a lot of rhymes in it. It might of had been a smige better if you expanded on the think of me part at the end. This is one of my favorites that is personal to me. your work hits the spot. Luvs, ML