Reviews for Fallen
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
I like that little metaphor of the fence.

nice poem
Fida chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
You can really hear the emotion put into this poem. It makes the reader feel what the author felt. The short phrases convey a hint of urgency, more like someone's actually thinking it than it's written to be just read. I really like it.
Ruby Waters chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
hey, i like your personification of the fence. it's pretty interesting and unique but it speaks out bodly with meaning. :)~ jasna