Reviews for Kisses
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
wow.. very cool.. I like the whole evilness of something that's usually happy & sweet
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I like the implied relationship between kisses and being wounded... it's fresh-also, I'm really impressed by the way your poetry is so focused on friendship... it's something that is not written about as often as it should be...
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
Wow, I love this so much, I wrote a little poem called "Crimson Tears", it should be up to read soon, please keep writing, I love your work so much x weasel within x
myno chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
well written- i read through quite a bit of your work, but liked this one best.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
great. Love the line "with your crimson kisses." Makes them sound menacing.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
i have to say i love this...its so amazing and i love the concept you've used...i can really identitfy with this its bloody great...i really love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
EWindheim chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
First things first:"You can see them on outside" need a "the" in there.

A really beautiful, heartfelt poem. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and everything. Reminds me of events of my past. Very nicely done.~Hawke