Reviews for would you ever notice
Wistera chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Nice, though the grizzly bear and acid rain make it seem slightly forced. All and all, though, you do a great job of rhyming and kudos to you. Good job. ::Hands over chocolate kudos::
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Very sad... but the line about the grizzly bear lightens it up. Did you mean it to be like that?
Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
would they notice? they i do not know..but i probably would
Qaindonunon chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Though provoking, keep up the good work!
Suz4eva chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
I likeed this. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy
Minus the Bear chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Neat. I liked this. I loved the last line. It really makes you think.
this is britt chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
It's a good poem...shows the feeling of invisibility and obscurity and screaming out to that one person. I liked your style of rhyming.