Reviews for Cold
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
An interesting song. The last verse was well phrased, and tied in nicely with the first. Maybe a litle more variety on the rhymes...
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
cool, i prefer the beginning as the beat just seems so much more catchy and real here, but as a whole this is good and i can really hear a tune to it which is always a good sign.

by the way, reviews could never annoy me! i would love to hear what you think of my songs though, as a song writer yourself!

oh, and something i noticed in your song: "But I couldn’t relay on myself" - Rely.

hope this helps x weasel within x
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Wow, that was awesome!
having reached closure chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
Very true. The world is such a cold place, I sometimes wonder how there are nice and warm people, like you for instance.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
This is really great too. I can really understand where you're coming from and this is really powerful. QueenVixta x