Reviews for Fate
brokenxdreams chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
wow... thats really deep and good. im blown away..
Nut chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
wow. really nice!
Strawberry Wish chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I absolutely loved what you wrote about fate because I totally agree with it and this poem is beatifully written. Keep up the good work. )

~Eternal Seraph
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
Okay, this might just be fictionpress's formatting problems, but if lines three and four are connected rather than separate stanzas, then there is a tense error between them.

"I choose to stay with you

While you embraced change,"

If they are paired lines, maybe take out one of the o's in choose, to make the tense fit embraced. If they are two stanzas that got run together when you posted on fictionpress, then forget I ever mentioned it.

I like this poem, good work.
maciena chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
i like, nice, good job
peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
fate is fate..and i think fate adn love our partners..anyways, nice poem. i really liked it...nice job