Reviews for The Last Beautiful Girl
Arutha chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Wow, I read the first couple of paragraphs and was like, "goody, a story straight from the 'we' channel ;P" but by the end I was completely enraptured. Wonderfully written; I've never witnessed a FP story this well-formed... ever. It has a kind of mysterious quality to it, what with all the people remaining nameless. Except Jake - kinda' makes him stick out like the girl in the red raincoat if you've ever seen that cliche black-and-white Hollywood clip. I think everyone has a piece of the Beautiful Girl in them, and if anyone else would actually take the damn time to read it, I think your story would really surprise people. Great job; keep it up ;P