duh duh duh! eveil vampire bitch out on the stroll. run for your lives! haha, sorry for that

it's starting to seem that madison is an evil, possissive bitch. i have an idea for what might/will happen in the semi-near future. but not really sure. oh and in one of the earlier chapter, one chrsitian was walking over to xavier's before he tried to get the key, you said that he saw a female vampire. she had green eyes and was there before madison arrived. did you forget about that, or are you going to continue with it later?

who thought blaise would help christian? not me. ah well. this is an awesoem line: Until someone decided to play God with its fate and destroy it. it's really cool. very good

yay update! ...and i just realize that i've been saying that a lot recently. ah well. error:but running to run away at the same time. should be 'wanting' me thinks. the ending is a bit confusing, but you probably wanted it that way

Still reading but it has to be said...Christian and Xavier captivate me.

I am about to read the rest but I wanted to give a review on the first chapter before I continued. First for constructive criticism...There were some typos. For instance using now or know in place of no. Other than that I find no fault in it and I like the style of writing you opted for. Very dry and to the point, almost bitter in a sense when coming from Christian.

O.O that was short... error: (dont you just LOVE me?) Xavier laid in his bed. should belay down or was laying, or something. and also: hoping that she would be able to distract his mind form what he was feeling. from! yes so...

yay! update! i was gone for the past five days with no internet access! (horried gasp!) but now i have returned from the depths of hell. ...though i never knew hell was so fun! -does random dance- okay, now that we're all caught up. good good. and error: “What do you mean,” he asked off-handedly. question mark! -points to sentence crazily. you need a bloody question mark. -runs off screaming 'question mark! question mark!-

so madison knew xavier before he was changed? ookay. i dun know if this is an error: She had heard rumors that a human boy, the son of the powerful vampire hunter Hayden' or if you just changed the guy's name. i think it was somethign with a 'b'... ah well. kinda short, but good

wonderful chapter! please update soon!

woot! update! -random dance- error: knowing that he didn’t’ really want to read. yup yup!

again the last paragraph and the chapter title were great. the line: why is love never fair? is also brilliant. you dont mind me pointing out errors, do you?: I understand his need for freedom but…to us me? and i dont really get this one: Mortals too pure form our reach…too scared in the end' ah well, brilliant, otherwise

i really like the last paragraph and the chapter title fits perfectly. error: No, Xavier had actually kissed by. so besides that, good good

if he just wanted to get awaty, why'd he kiss him? ug, bad situation. error:I give up on this…on these emotion. should be this emotion or these emotions. so yeah, good though!

yay for confessions! haha lovely chapter. See ya later!