yay! you took my advice, merci! (thanks, if you didn't know) good good, you're really fast at updating. thats something i can never do. -laughing idiotically- toodles then, and may muftah be with you always

another wonderful chapter. And I'm right there with poor ol' Xavier lol poor guy...And hopefully Christian will wake up and those two can spill their hearts out and all will be good of course with a dash of angst and drama, and probaly some more sexy vampires mixed in hehe i'm so diggin this! And thanks for your review for my poem! it meant a lot to me. And sorry for all the typos in my reviews. I noticed my other one was some what cryptic ;; bad key board. Oh well Que Sera Sera! lada!

error: Glancing over a this black bed... other than that, brilliant as usual

*sniff* that was even harder to read the second time lol I'm still not sure how Christian looks. Because i wanna say he's average build but i also so him kinda thin (well toned though) but shorter than Xavier. they are just too cute together! haha oh and I LOVE the names you picked for your characters lol In one of my other stories i used the name Xavier as well. I only know of the name because it's my dad's lol But i'm guessing this Xavier sounds like EX-ay-vee-ir rather than Ha-vee-air, no? Either way, it's a cool name lol wonderful story! update soon!

ug, damn you! damn you, is all i have to say. -vitually smacks you- horrible person with cliffhangers

oh poor xavier...again. oh well. yup yup -flys to next chapter-

Very Interesting, that much I give you. Some things you left wide open, such as the secrecy that, in most cases, comes with vampires and their hunters. What I mean is, does everybody know that their are vampires around? What time period does this take place in? Does his mother know about the vamps? Hmm..loved the pick for the name, Christian. So perfect. A few spelling errors, you may want to look at, once or twice there was a word in a sentence that made no sense, but over all, very nice. Sorry its taken me so long to read it, send me an email, cause I've been real busy. I look forward to seeing where Christian goes with his new murderous heart. _

This is wonderful! And it's very well written, too. BUT when are we going to get some hot action?

you spelled christian's name as christina once. urg, i dun remember where. oh well. blaise is a cool name. and god? do you have any girl vampires, just noticing that all your characters are guys except christian's mother. so yeah. good good

so some reason i love the line: Focus, Christian told himself as he ran a shaky (Why am I shaking?) hand back through his smooth hair.' i don't know why. probably because of the way it's worded. nice style

oh poor xavier! -virtually pats the imaginary character- ah well! yay for update! great job as usual

a ha! so at least xavier is gay, maybe, probably, christian. -shrug- oh well. again you forgot a question mark. -points to last line- very, very good, nevertheless

yay! update! continueing greatness. you had some grammar mistakes in here, unlikethe others. the one i remember is: and how was his mother. it should have a question mark

okay question, not for this chapter: s cchristian gay? or merely basking in the glory of an immortal. i suppose it could be either, but it's just driving me nuts. really awesome story either way. please update soon.

ah ha! you cleared up the eating deal in the beginning of this chapter. oh yeah, well onward again! (very, very good story, as if you couldn't tell from me crazily reading it!)