Reviews for The Legacy of Lady Jane
Vivix chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
This story is caught with what I call the 'random humor virus.' Bunch of things happening is only 'very funny' if they are tied together in a strangely coherent packet. Douglas Adams did it very well in his Hitchhiker's series. But this story lacks... something. I read it as a 'thing happens... thing happens... great, something else happens... random stuff!... Moving on... thing happens...etc.' Even episodes of Family Guy had a general plot going on. It seems so... disjointed.